Serenade of a shattered soul

WOW WOW AND ANOTHER WOW, I truely love this poem. In my opinion everythinh in this poem is perfect:)

If friendship is a vice
and love a crime
then the heart
is ready to abnegate
the soul ready to be set free
and my muse ready for a burial
^^^
this is my fav stanza:)
Ofc a 5/5 from me, I would like to give u more:)

I swear I was reading that while rapping it!

Your words, and rhymes were very smooth, and I was moved with my thoughts being provoked.

Amazing write.

Now this is an anothr sad poem..but it is penned so wel by d excellence of d poet..

Saying abt being hurt and up to d core dat even soul alng wid d hrt has been shattered.
And a ques ,wil i able to be love smone else nw?
Coz d voice of heart has been stolen by u.
And i love this line whr u said..'a cold whimping to a warm beating hrt'..
And if fshp is bad and lv is crime..then it al happens..hrt abnegates and muse ready fr burial..
Awesome write..my friend..

Great poem, I don't understand why we blame ourselves or try to find a reason for losing in love. Good poem short but expresses so much.

Sounds like the sole inspiration in your life left you with a sour taste of a relationship that has not understood each other..touching write.