Until You Accept My Love

by Paul Gondwe   Aug 14, 2011


Days go by,
night falls
Closing in are huge walls

What I see is a large void
Something I could avoid
Yet I do not

An inner feeling,
something so rare
Tingles every inch of my body

A kiss from you is my prayer
A treasure,
a diamond I would cherish and care

Why will i not commit?
My reluctance
Is it my fear that you will not permit?
A chance is all I need
My feelings for you have no limit

From north to south,
i will shout to the whole world
Whether I die or my breath runs out,
i will not spare a word
Until you accept my love

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  • 14 years ago

    by Lofallenve

    I agree with what has been said. Beautiful and so sweet. :) I love your words. 5/5

  • 14 years ago

    by Misfit Silentts

    I absolutely love this. Very good.

  • 14 years ago

    by L

    Wow wow wow...

    "From north to south,
    i will shout to the whole world
    Whether I die or my breath runs out,
    i will not spare a word
    Until you accept my love."

    Brilliant.

  • 14 years ago

    by Paul Gondwe

    Thank u...:)

  • 14 years ago

    by catherin

    Hey nice poem ...i liked it..:-)..

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