My heart holds a thousand dreams

I really like this, its cute :) 5/5

I agree with Connie ^
This was good but the flow was choppy and it seemed a little rushed, take more time and it would be awesome!
The title wasn't one to draw the reader in, and make them interested, too simple and cliche.
Otheriwse a very good write

Love Tara

"My heart with guide your way"

I think the flow might work better with

"heart guiding your way"

This isn't a favorite , maybe it was rushed but your talent still shines through. I enjoy your work very much.

Connie

That's how much I love you, in my heart you're sealed
Look deep into my eyes and soul, for all will be revealed
^^

You know, after I read these lines, I was really inspired.
Well-done, my friend, well-done.