Before you leave

by Jenni   Aug 25, 2011


I can no longer enjoy
the calm landscape,
its redolent smell
or its gentle breeze.

You're the only one
I want to breathe in
and lock up inside,
before you leave.

I'm captured
in this desert of
the fallen, yet
I'm drowning in
these feelings
of mine.

I want to love you
once more, like I did
the very first time.

Owls eyes resting
on my restless body.
I want to once more
be close to you,
before I lose you,
forever.

Will I find a way
out of this misery?
I want to hear your
laughter and smile
together.

Before I lose you
forever..

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  • 12 years ago

    by xoxShorteexox

    "I want to love you
    once more, like I did
    the very first time."

    Those lines...are so touching, Jenni.
    Another amazing poem written by you!

    5/5

    -Heather

  • 12 years ago

    by Jess

    Your wording was awesome, your sanzas are brilliat, and it does not drag on.
    anyways, 5/5
    You deserve it!:)
    Jessi

  • 12 years ago

    by Dave

    Very nice poem, I enjoyed it!

  • 12 years ago

    by CoLliN

    Your poems are absolutely all smiles
    felt as if you were talking to me
    i think i even blushed a few times lol
    you have a beautiful sense of visual effects in your pieces

  • 12 years ago

    by CoLliN

    Your poems are absolutely all smiles
    felt as if you were talking to me
    i think i even blushed a few times lol
    you have a beautiful sense of visual effects in your pieces

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