Done

by tainted melody   Sep 6, 2011


Done wasting precious time and youth.
Done examining every single word.
Done tirelessly hiding reality and truth.
Done waiting on things never heard.

Done living behind these bars.
Done smiling when I wanna cry.
Done covering self inflicted scars.
Done giving you another try.

Start living in every happy moment.
Start thinking about what I want.
Start taking back the heart I lent.
Start having dreams that you don't haunt

Start Remembering to laugh out loud.
Start over and just be proud.

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  • 12 years ago

    by Cinnamonspice

    What I liked the most about this poem is the determination, the standing tall and never allowing someone to pull you under. You speak words that boast others courage. Awesome

    Nicely done. Most ppl don't like repetition in poems but you made it work for you

  • 12 years ago

    by Moonlit Candles

    Now that's what I'm talking about. :P No I thought this was another great poem. Nice write. :)

  • 12 years ago

    by White Orchid

    I loved the idea of this poem because you started it with how you are done putting the effort forth without the other person putting in any effort at all and then I like how you changed it near the end when you started to say start, so you are starting over and fresh and thinking about what you really want. So very nice write on this one also.

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