On the Road to Rebirth

by NightFlyer   Sep 8, 2011


Take this path unto the sea
Neath bright clouds, chalcedony
On a marbled path I walk
Past these twisted trees so dark
Here the moon eerily gleams
On this road of haunted dreams
To my destination far
Beckons like a silver star
From a place where waters dance
Guiding me, my midnight trance
Swaying branches lead the way
To a glowing moonlit bay
See it shine beyond the bend
There my sad life's journey's end
Feel the wind as I come near
To the endless ocean clear
Lapping waves, please take me in
Toward my rebirth, I begin
To your mystery, I leap
Pulled by ocean currents deep
Soon to me, a new life's shown
Out here in the great unknown.

by Night Flyer (c) 2011
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  • 14 years ago

    by retha

    The unknown made you reap the seeds you have sown within the darkness of its light you have met the shadow you lost during that long night. And she said I would love you as I loved him.

  • 14 years ago

    by vip

    Lovely poem!

  • 14 years ago

    by Kiko

    This is a nice idea for a poem, and the language and meter were pretty good. However, I found the simple rhyming pattern to be a bit monotonous after a while. Just rewriting this with a slightly more complex rhyming pattern could make a big difference imo.

  • 14 years ago

    by nouriguess

    You are not only imaginative or....creative..you also pen your imagination and creation the perfect way. This is worth a front page win.

  • 14 years ago

    by Meena Krish

    What a lovely read that was surrounded by darkness and then broken up by the touch of a light..loved the feeling this poem gave..very nice!

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