Noise That Keeps Me Up at Night

by Brittany C   Sep 8, 2011


Noise in the night
that likes to keep me up.
Continuously going
with no end in sight.

It pushing air around me
sometimes making me to cold.
If I didn't have covers
I'd be an ice cube.

On top of that it collects dust
all over it, in it.
Hope I'm not allergic!

They like to be in the way by day
constantly having to be moved.
Toes get stubbed
making many words come out my mouth.

They come in many sizes,
weird shapes and numerous colors.
They're every where.

Sometimes I hate them.
Fans!

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  • 12 years ago

    by Meena Krish

    Ahahh...and here I was guessing what it was that was keeping you up! Liked the read and the surprisivg end..keep penning :)

  • 12 years ago

    by Innocent Fairy

    Hi! this was funny and very very good
    and i totally agree with, The Poetess :) :)

    On top of that it collects dust
    all over it, in it.
    Hope I'm not allergic!
    - this was great and to me funny in some kind of smart butt way but that's just me anyways i love loved it :)

    If I didn't have covers
    I'd be an ice cube.
    - this is my favorite but altogeter the poem was good :)

  • 12 years ago

    by Something Diabolical

    I found myself smiling throughout reading this poem
    never expected the fan though haha!

    Very good!

  • 12 years ago

    by Jenni

    I was like slowly reading this poem thinking about how I know this feeling but I did not expect the end at all. I have to admit that the stanzas do not seem to flow smoothly together because, there doesn't seem to be a connection until you read the end. It's not as bad as it sounds now though. I like the idea and think that you found fiting words to describe the fan.

  • 12 years ago

    by nouriguess

    LOL
    i was like
    what the hell is she talking bout!?
    and then FANS just popped up like i dunno hahaahhaahhahaahhaa
    very creative lol:P

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