Flattering Raven -Collab-

by believeinlove87   Sep 8, 2011


Tears astreamed from my heavy eyes,
As his fiery burnt my ending cries,
Are you sure you're not a matron from heaven,
Our anniversary lands on a lucky seven,
How can I have someone so perfectly amazing,
making my heart beat faster then a flattering raven,
you're everything more I'd never be,
one i would gladly sacrifice for with ease,
as we lay side by side intertwining our hands together,
I'm looking forward to a happy ever after.
you, becoming my life,
and i,willingly your wife.

A Collab with Joseph Boadi :)
Enjoyed working with you!
-http://www.best-love-poems.com/poems.php?id=1174510-
Please Comment & rate on his as well <3

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  • 12 years ago

    by lOsT sOuL

    This is a great poem..:) i loved it ..:) nice work .. willingness to be together..:) it's perfect it shows the love between 2 :) great work :) 5/5

  • 12 years ago

    by Sparkling snow flake

    Really good Job! Its really hard creating a poem with someone else and this one turned out great!
    Jenni is right! It does flow smoothly
    5/5

  • 12 years ago

    by Innocent Fairy

    Wow though this is short i really loved it

    How can I have someone so perfectly amazing,
    making my heart beat faster then a flattering raven
    - this is my favorite part but i truely loved the entire thing :) :) 5/5

  • 12 years ago

    by Liliana

    You guys did a really good job, she told me you guys were doing a collab and I was already expecting a great poem and for sure I didnt got dissapointed :) 5/5

  • 12 years ago

    by aanika R I P

    Cutetest part from the whole of it..... <3

    "I'm looking forward to a happy ever after.
    you, becoming my life,
    and i,willingly your wife."

    loved it :)

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