Don't say I didn't try,
when you look back at us
wondering what went wrong,
when all of our good memories
get lost forever in a dark hole.
Don't pick up that phone to dial
my number when you start to miss
me; when you were the one
that pushed me away, the one
who wouldn't let me inside.
Don't let a single tear fall from those eyes,
when every morning you wake up with
no new messages, when you never hear me
say " I love you baby," again, as much it
may hurt you for losing me, remind yourself
that I'm only gone because of your actions.
When your friends question you about
what happened and you start to talk,
don't say I didn't try, don't make up
some stupid excuse, because the only
honest answer to that question is you.
It may not be the best poem that you ever done, but it certainly is a good one (I haven't read very many yet) :) However, I wouldn't have put this in the miscellaneous section - this seems more like a lost love poem. It probably would have fared better there than here...
This seems to me like a healing poem after a failed relationship. At the same time, it seems like you are trying to slap him in the face a little to try and wake him up - try to make him stop doing the things that caused you guys to break up in the first place.
I can see the emotion in this poem. You were hurt and you are trying to get over it. It also seems like you are annoyed with him as well. Those are the main emotions that I get out of here...