by Amreen Sep 17, 2011
category :
Miscellaneous /
Misc. poems
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A country called India... |
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I loved the simplicity of the poem. This poem reveals how proud and thus faithful you are to your country. You know since my childhood until now I also loved India and this guided me to dig for the the indian history and culture either through reading or watching movies. i remember an old one having the name "Disco Dancer" and another new 'Bollywood vs hollywood' having the link: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=UwqVCJFBdBY |
by christopher
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This is certainly not a poem it is more like an advertisment for a holiday brouchure with a factual writing on a country called India. how anyone could consider this a winning poem is beyond my comprehension. |
by L
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Namaste! |
by E Dacaf
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This just seemed like a list of facts..maybe use some more colorful words and Rework the format? |
by Brittany C
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It isn't really a poem. Try changing the format. The wording was ok. |