by Cinnamonspice Sep 19, 2011
category :
Love, romance /
secret love
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Bella luna, reigning queen of the night |
by The Queen
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Nice imagery you have here, you two. Now I've got a perfect excuse to work on my rhyming skills. Loved the repetition as well, perfect diction and overall effect. |
by The Queen
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Nice imagery you have here, you two. Now I've got a perfect excuse to work on my rhyming skills. Loved the repetition as well, perfect diction and overall effect. |
by Liliana
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Could you guys make this any better, I dont think so, this is awesome, great job you two :) |
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Very Nice!!!! |
by S. Van Dyke
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I loved reading this. I also loved how you used 'bella luna' for beautiful moon. The flow was elegant and yet you could see the conflict between moon and sun. It also had some great detail. All in all a very pleasant read. Beautiful. 5/5 |