Mistress of the Moon

by The Queen   Oct 6, 2011


Mistress of the Moon

and there she is,
in all her beauty
with crimson lips,
kohl-rimmed eyes;
of outraging curves,
and mesmeric laugh

a white skinned goddess
of melancholia
perhaps a poet
with a slighty
heavier heart

a grotesque reflection
of naivety and nothingness
may her innocence
be a shield
like a small umbrella
in the rain

**Written for Mera Luna

Copyright (C) 2011 by EvanescentMoon.

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  • 14 years ago

    by Jenna Bella Oldridge

    I can see why this poem won the contest. It was excellently put. I have no critique to offer as this was perfect

    5/5

  • 14 years ago

    by Lauren

    Hey there. I don't know you, but you deacribed me so perfectly. Beautiful peice of writing. Amazing adjectives. A++ in my mind

  • 14 years ago

    by LivHelen Kernan

    Very very beautiful!

  • 14 years ago

    by LivHelen Kernan

    Very very beautiful!

  • 14 years ago

    by Faithless

    Wow partner, you totally nailed it, I mean what could be more beautiful than a poem tribute to a close friend, in description that is so profound. I love how you describe 'kohl-rimmed eyes' and how you used the word 'melancholia' totally mesmerizing. A well deserved win. Congrats partner:)

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