Dormant

Wow that's exactly what I did :D thanxs for ur amazing comment xx

I quite enjoyed this poem.

I don't know how others see this but this is what I felt about the poem...

I felt as though it is about an unrequited love.

Dormant,
in his silent footsteps,
for which they kiss,
I loomed,
a fire burning soul,
as my temper grew,
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Did you catch the man you love kissing and being with another? You felt angry and betrayed.

i called upon the morning dew,
love did not bloom
but rusted with confusion.
Dormant,
i knew
and he did not see,
but in death he now sleeps.
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He didn't notice you were watching and now your love for him has died.

A lovely poem. Emotional well written.

x

You already know what i think of this & that i love it<3
5/5