Promises

by Innocent Fairy   Oct 11, 2011


It's been too long
and you feel your self losing hope
and your thoughts going crazy
is this a game
or is this love fake or real,
maybe he's too busy,
maybe he's going to give me a surprise.

It's been too long
and this is messed up
but i love him,
i miss him like hell
and i let him in,
but i can't take another heartbreak
but it's too late,
I've taken the risk.

We've both made promises
that i wish to keep,
i do not want to break,
I've been dreaming,
and now reality is breaking,

I'm scared,
frustrated,
confused,
in love,,,

I'm going insane,
this is insane!

It's been too long
since we last talked,
it's killing me inside,
and i can only hold on for
so long,
I fear I'm losing faith
but a promise we both made
and i wish to honor it
but you have already broken some
and my thoughts burning
with wild fiery.

Please just tell me
DO YOU LOVE ME
OR NOT ?

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  • 12 years ago

    by Georgia

    I know how this feels and it's so relatable.
    wow, good poem :) I love the structure and flow 5/5 !

  • 12 years ago

    by Decayed

    I think this piece conveys so much purity, rawness, and most of all, the tempo was moving.

    At the first read, I discovered something: It sounds like a Lady G song... lol, I don't know why. This is honest.. I really felt it.

    Amazing job Kristian.
    Great one.

  • 12 years ago

    by Bobby

    This is one outstanding poem, I re-read this poem many times, for it projects feeling and the need of communication in a relationship. I loved it :0)

  • 12 years ago

    by A lonely soul

    Yes indeed. A poem that carries the reader's emotions with it. Nice work, your Prince charming will arrive some day soon. Well written.

  • 12 years ago

    by TJ Arizona Eagle

    An excellent piece. You penned confusion with emotions. The flow was perfect, the reader has no problem following .Good work Lil Fairy