You

by Mel   Oct 15, 2011


You are

Winter.

You taste like paradise.
Has no one told you?
You're beautiful.

You are

The creamy canvas I could never bring myself to paint over.

If I could drink in the vanilla
of your neck, I would.
If I could watch the snowy sparkles
in your eyes, I would.
And kiss the frost from your lips,

Darling, I would.

You are

Paradise.
Has no one told you?
Let me admire you.

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  • 13 years ago

    by Marcus blake

    Amazing ^__^ thats a love poem for you

  • 14 years ago

    by Dark Secrets

    This poem is simple, sensual and beautifully worded... I could taste your emotions and live the moment. Well written, it deserves the win :)

  • 14 years ago

    by Autuumnbree

    Excellent, short but very intense, full of love and emotions. I

  • 14 years ago

    by Mel

    Oh wow, thank you all so much.

    I actually wrote this for my on and off boyfriend, he hates having pale skin, and has a low self esteem.. I think he's gorgeous.

  • 14 years ago

    by Innocent Fairy

    Wow wow and wow :) so good i have no words to explain but i loved it and a fantastic read :) 10/10 jsut lovely

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