The Icarus Account/ Mayday

Wow, great piece. Emotional and so well written. The word choice is terrific and the images are stunning as usual from you.

The words create quite a few powerful images flashing through the reader's mind that can definitely touch them in unexplainable ways. Very well-written.

5/5

-Heather

Touch then softer than a breath sway upon the melody of this moment as if in death.
Not to crush but gently hold, wrap around and softly tenderly fold. Precious this heart if only to me then.

That was so dark, sad and emotional. The ending spoke out to me. Perfect write.

Amazing!
wouldnt change a thing to be honest

flow was brilliant and wording supurb
this piece really called out to me.
think i will check out your other poems, glad i did this one

5/5 from me