Yawning Hearts (Tetractys)

by HOLLY ARMER   Oct 20, 2011


Love
beckons
Awakening
ones senses as
our yawning hearts wipe sleep from tired eyes

(Five line poem with a syllable count of 1,2,3,4,10)

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  • 12 years ago

    by TJ Arizona Eagle

    Not an easy form but you did a great job. Loved the wording and the easy read
    Excellent

  • 12 years ago

    by Jenna Bella Oldridge

    I don't believe I have ever come across this type of poem before but I really like it. I think for a very short poem you did very well. I can see you chose words carefully so that you could get your message across. Everything just fitted together

    Excellent

    5/5

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