Life in the page

by Lee   Oct 26, 2011


Wonderful it is to me, to see a book thats writ,
with sense of upheld elegance, and otherworldly wit.
The words and prose, of writers gone, but rarely writers living.
fills me with a sense of joy, these books just keep on giving.

But how I feel about these words, is rarely worth expressing
it is the style of written word, which i find most impressing.
J R Tolkien had a gift, Charles D.ickens had the same.
But William Shakespeare, above them both, would put them all to shame.

The gift they had, I tell you now, injecting life to page.
Expressing subtle nuances, like jealousy and rage.
To give the characters the gift of life, is really quite inspired.
And I still think of Romeo, and how that all transpired.

have you ever tried to word, the subtleties of pain.
trying in a vain attempt to describe a mans disdain
well if you have... i know I've tried, and failed to unseen laughter
just keep in mind the three old names, are names of English masters

So now I have said, all there is to say, on this important matter.
I said my piece, and only so, the masters, I can flatter.
It is much more than just the words, which is the remarkable thing.
more profound than all of this, is the order those words are in.

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  • 12 years ago

    by Jess

    Breathtaking.
    Intrieging.
    :) 5/5

  • 12 years ago

    by Amreen

    The poem is fab...!I wonder why you doubt your potentials...
    the only thing was the poem appeared like paragraphs but it possessed the flow of poetry when it is read...!
    nice attempt..!

  • 12 years ago

    by Innocent Fairy

    YOU ARE AMAZING
    Very wonderful and great and wowing once again I love love loved it,,,in my opinion you sound alot like or remind me of my favorite author Robert Frost :) 5/5 ur on my favs list too :D

  • 12 years ago

    by Lee

    Wow thanks!, It really had never occured to me that I should try poetry, and to hear so many great people say I have talent, is just the icing on the cake.

    I hope this isn't beginners luck... :)

    And as far as this site go's... its really great to see some feedback on things like this.

    I'll keep writing, maybe something a little deeper.

  • 12 years ago

    by Lofallenve

    You are offically one of my favorite writers. :)
    5/5