You Said...

by believeinlove87   Oct 30, 2011


You said,
if you had to wait forever
for me you would,
loving me never stopped,
that you wanted me long term.

You said,
I love you so much you have
no idea,
lets move in together already,
with our family lets have 4 kids,
one boy & one girl, the other two
i don't know right now.

You said,
never give up on us baby boo,
i changed you with this little thing
called love,
the promise ring means alot to you.

You said this & that,
was it true?
was it some sick mind game?
look at us now, a complete disarray,
supposed to be together,
but so far away.

You said you loved me,
did you even mean what you said?

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  • 12 years ago

    by Decayed

    HOLLY!

    what?

    this is amazing.. like a song or something, it sounds.

    You Said this & that.. shows so many contradictory emotions portrayed by the opposite terms...

    I say, this is amazing!

    The ending had me captured a lot, like magnet.

    And the rhythm between 'Say and disarray' reflects the sadness.

    Great job, Holy.

  • 12 years ago

    by Meme

    Never trust someone until they "act" not just "say"
    I understood exactly what you meant with this poem, you start questioning everything he ever said. Was it true? Or were they just a bunch of lies?

    Good job :)

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