Eternal dance

by Dark Secrets   Nov 8, 2011


Swaying
... against your nerves
playing them like a
xylophone, mischievously
hitting the cords
that hang above the keys

I playfully swerve
... and twirl,
and lay my head back
as my pupils push
to the back of my skull

Whiteness...
surrounds my world
and my arms are
almost wrapped across my body

I think I've locked you,
in this eternal dance

Round,
and round, and round
Halting dizzy
I fell amidst your neurotic mind,
with no sense of memory
just like that

...Lost?!

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  • 12 years ago

    by Yakori bint Muhammed

    Wow! this is really an intoxicating dance it seems. One can feel how the intensity of the feelings of the dance consumes one. It's so real, one can imagine the tune of the vibes radiating between the lovers using beautiful affections. Lovely use of words to convey love in the air, in a creative way. Nicely penned, your an awesome writer. Stay blessed, Cheers!

  • 12 years ago

    by TJ Arizona Eagle

    What you have done is totally creative. Wording was no place near cliche' but brilliant and imaginative. Great write , enjoyable read

  • 12 years ago

    by Ms Happiness

    Amazing:) I love it:) ur going to my Fav list:) a 5/5 from me:)

  • 12 years ago

    by Ms Happiness

    Amazing:) I love it:) ur going to my Fav list:) a 5/5 from me:)

  • 12 years ago

    by Decayed

    Zahra.. you really penned a sincere piece with lots of flawless imagery to deliver, in a musical way.

    And the questions.. brilliant method in approaching the reader.

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