I don't know how that I missed this one, I believe I wrote a poem about this magic elixir, but forgot the Title. Nice work!
5 years ago
Haha what a way to enjoy this beautiful piece than to read it drinking coffee. Ahh how it awakens every sense :) I'm usually a tea drinker but coffee as become more addictive as the insomnia days take toll.
I laughed at this, but not for the reason you might think. I'm a coffee addict, and this write brilliantly summed up every morning for me before work right after having to lazily wake up at 5.40am, pray (it's a Muslim thing), and then brew my addiction hit. I really liked it - you made my day, even if somewhat indirectly. Thank you :)
What a brilliantly clever little write this is - and the last line was excellent. The taste exhilarates and awakens, and the smell soothes and relaxes. Great imagination throughout this piece. Well done and all the very best