What Is It?

by Marii   Nov 29, 2011


Confused cuz i dont know what to do
Anxious cuz i really wanna be with you
Lonely cuz i have no one to hold my hand
Upset cuz i dont know if youll understand
Scared cuz i dont know if you wanna be with me
Disappointed cuz i dont think we will ever be!!!

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  • 13 years ago

    by Mello193

    Confused
    because I don't know what to do
    Anxious
    because I really wanna be with you
    Lonely
    because I have no one to hold my hand
    Upset
    because i don't know if you'll ever understand
    Scared
    because I don't know if you wanna be with me
    Disappointed
    because I don't think we will ever be!!!

    i don't think i need to keep telling you about my editing. this one rhymed really well but the "cuz's" were just plain annoying. really. i also feel like if you were to put this piece in the format above it carries a lot more emotion