Ideas (tyburn)

by TJ Arizona Eagle   Dec 10, 2011


Aspire
Desire
Expire
Retire
Ideas will aspire, desire, need.
They will never expire, retire, bleed.

A challenge from Jenni
I'm not sure if I should thank you for this one LOL:-)

A six line poem consisting of 2, 2, 2, 2, 9, 9 syllables.

The first four lines rhyme and are all descriptive words. The last two lines rhyme and incorporate
the first, second, third, and fourth lines as the 5th through 8th syllables.

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  • 12 years ago

    by BlueJay

    Wow, this piece is awesome. Its so simple yet it says a lot. Very creative and inspiring in its own way. Excellent write. 5/5

  • 12 years ago

    by Whatever works

    So simple yet so powerful
    i like how you added a twist
    made the inspiration more powerful in tihs poem
    nice work TJ :)

  • 12 years ago

    by Sylvia

    All ideas we should aspire too and you have presented them very well in this form. Well done.

  • 12 years ago

    by Ingrid

    Once we stop growing, we start dying. An essential part of growth is dreaming, of ideas emerging inside your head. To make them reality is up to the individual.

    Nice work on the format, TJ:)

    5/5 Ingrid

  • 12 years ago

    by Decayed

    This is new to my eyes.

    But it's kind of cool :)

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