I'm done

by Mattias Ostling   Dec 16, 2011


So, we've reached the end
And it feels like,
it has only been a week
It was amazing
and it was great
as time flew by,
I wished for more

But we've reached the end
And there is no more
I have to find
Another path
Another journey
Another goal
To sate my hunger
To fill the void

Because now...
Now I'm done

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  • 13 years ago

    by Chelsey

    I think we all will reach this point in life, in some area of our life, relationship, a job, etc there are just some things we find arent meant to be and you just have to be done to have a better future....

    I'm not sure if I mentioned to you before, but sometimes capatalizing every sentence takes away from the poem a bit. I bet some commas would help break this poem up a little as well.. other than that, i love you work and will continue reading!

  • 13 years ago

    by Maple Tree

    There are times... when a lot can be learned in a short amount of time... powerful piece~

  • 13 years ago

    by L

    What I like about this poem is the simplicity, and that the words aren't force. They run smoothly, I can only say that perhaps one or two commas might be needed but haha who cares. They don't seem to have any importance in this particular poem.

  • 13 years ago

    by L

    What I like about this poem is the simplicity, and that the words aren't force. They run smoothly, I can only say that perhaps one or two commas might be needed but haha who cares. They don't seem to have any importance in this particular poem.

  • 13 years ago

    by Meme

    Loved the simplicity of this poem, it delievered the idea in such a calm and easy way.
    Flowed nicely, and the wording was just right.

    Great job.

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