I love how you have expressed the changes this person has made in your life...the ending is fantastic...the whole poem is a great read. Well done.
12 years ago
I love the end, "living life nocturnally". it has a lot of meaning in that one part, not only that you stay awake in the night, but also that its a secret, hidden life, and a life shrouded in darkness. it is truly a powerful image, which complements the underlying emotions. well done.