A Waterfall

Such sadness portrayed in simple words but engrosses one as he/she reads on. Your use of nature for the theme of the poem, gives it a natural feeling. Very relatable and depressing. Beautifully crafted with your carefully selected words of natures finest. I likey! much luv. ;-)

This was beautiful and creative. I can't give you a single line or stanza as a favorite. For all are tied into this masterpiece

Wow!! Beautiful!!! As always, I love your poetry hon!

I love the idea of how these dewdrops fall... and how it's gradual... but then it becomes a waterfall.

I loved these stanzas:

Standing at the vulnerability
of the sky, as yesterday drags
its velvety darkness revealing
a new beginning
>> best part: velvety darkness !!!

I opened my eyes to realize
that every teardrop leads to a
waterfall, so I surrender my tears
with the tails of yesterday.
>> love the idea of tears leading to a waterfall... it reminded me of a quote I came up with... it's something like "I'm a human waterfall"

This poem really touched me and I loved it... I like how you compared the taste of tears to ocean tears, there's a saltiness about it, which inspired me to write my poem about the ocean.. and your description reminded me of my inspiration!

Amazing poem hon! Well done =D

This is powerful meme
a good poem, a very powerful display of your poets skills

Meme, this is undeniably a waterfall of organic emotions and flawlessness... Great one.