Goodbye Aquarius (Kyrielle)

Oh this is interesting, again it can be read in many ways. There are a few lines which I relate to through abuse and it is like the abuser is being described here.

Haunted by your divine shadow
Scented trails of stale tobacco

- this especially made me think of this, how a victim feels even years after being abused.

I realise this is probably not what you had in mind while you penned this but this is what I pick up from it. Right to the point of sitting alone like a prisoner.

such a powerful poem. well done. x

I usually find repetitiveness weak, but not on this one. Good job.

This is my favorite,

"Sorrow sings, raindrop flirtations"