Committing To You

by believeinlove87   Jan 9, 2012


Committing myself to you I promise,
no amount of distance, no amount of months
not being able to talk to you will change my mind;
How could I possibly even consider letting go of
an amazing guy who makes me smile so much it
hurts to move my face?

Since day one I've known what I'm getting myself into,
the way you make me feel, the smile that never fades,
just knowing your mine makes it all worth while,
five months will fly by fast, I'll be able to be in your arms,
looking up into your eyes saying I've missed you baby.

Don't you see the way I look at you when we skype?
An undeniable chemistry that flows between us,
connecting us together regardless of the distance,
every day that passes is another day closer to being
with you; Can't possibly risk losing you because you
choose to be in the military.

Committing myself to you I promise,
aware of what the circumstances are with us,
no amount of time, no amount of not speaking will
ever change my mind from wanting to be with you,
I gave you my word I'm ready for this commitment
& Baby, it isn't gonna change<3.

A Poem About My Boyfriend<3

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  • 12 years ago

    by xoxShorteexox

    Wow... that was just beautiful and very sweet, Holly. :D And I get to be all sappy and say "AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW." -=giggles=- Anyway.

    5/5

    -Heather

  • 12 years ago

    by radio host

    I would love for you to read your poem on my radio show by phone. If interested email me, thanks !

  • 12 years ago

    by Meme

    I do agree with Kristian, it sounds like a song. Its amazingly written, feels real, flows smooth, and just very sweet.

    Good job sweetie :)

  • 12 years ago

    by Lioness

    Well hun this poem is beautiful and I am glad you have written this about your boyfriend. By the sounds of things you have followed your heart and made the right choice ;)

    I love the first stanza - I love how you said he makes you smile so much your face hurts to move it lol very cute

    It makes me think of when people are taking photos at a Wedding and the bride is smiling the whole day that by night everything hurts lol

    I hope that he reads this poem because it is a lovely tribute to him

    x

  • 12 years ago

    by Innocent Fairy

    U know this actually sounds like a song,,amazing lovely true and u great everything fantasicaly written :) 5/5