The Forgotten Heroes

by Karla   Jan 12, 2012


When he left, he was 18
and didn't know that the road to hell was paved
with good intentions.

It was as if he was living inside Picasso's Guernica
when the explosions baptized his life,
sprinkling his eyes with death, scattering pieces of his heart
on that holy ground.
(It was so early to be immolated)

He feeds his demons daily
as the blind balance weighs the disaster:
123 lie in the Darwin cemetery,
350 committed suicide exiled on white and blue soil,
and the rest was shunned and branded as failures.
Nobody saw they were 18-19 years old
when they were invited to conquer paradise.

He would like to have been an Art teacher,
maybe he could have married a girl called Guadalupe
but he was buried alive.
He is sleeping in that cemitery with the other lambs.

For him The Falklands will always be The Malvinas.
For him the quest for the Holy Grail ended in shame.

Karla Bardanza
http://asmoonsewsthesatinstars.blogspot.com

*The Falklands War (Spanish: Guerra de las Malvinas or Guerra del Atlantico Sur), also known as the Falklands Conflict or Falklands Crisis, was a 1982 limited war between Argentina and the United Kingdom. The conflict resulted from the long-standing dispute over the sovereignty of the Falkland Islands and South Georgia and the South Sandwich Islands, which lie in the South Atlantic east of Argentina.
The Falklands War began on Friday 2 April 1982, when Argentine forces invaded and occupied the Falkland Islands and South Georgia. The British government dispatched a naval task force to engage the Argentine Navy and Air Force, and retake the islands by amphibious assault. The resulting conflict lasted 74 days and ended with the Argentine surrender on 14 June 1982, which returned the islands to British control. 649 Argentine military personnel, 255 British military personnel and three Falkland Islanders died during the conflict. It remains the most recent external conflict to be fought by the UK without any allied states and the only external Argentine war since the 1880s.
In the period leading up to the war, and especially following the transfer of power between military dictators General Jorge Rafael Videla and General Roberto Eduardo Viola in late-March 1981, Argentina had been in the midst of a devastating economic crisis and large-scale civil unrest against the military junta that had been governing the country since 1976.[10] In December 1981 there was a further change in the Argentine military regime bringing to office a new junta headed by General Leopoldo Galtieri (acting president), Brigadier Basilio Lami Dozo and Admiral Jorge Anaya. Anaya was the main architect and supporter of a military solution for the long-standing claim over the islands,[11] calculating that the United Kingdom would never respond militarily.[12] In doing so the Galtieri government hoped to mobilise Argentines' long-standing patriotic feelings towards the islands and thus divert public attention from the country's chronic economic problems and the regime's ongoing human rights violations.
(source:Wikipedia)

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  • 12 years ago

    by John Dlyan Boone BABY

    Really good im very lucky to have read this great poem

  • 12 years ago

    by Kiko

    I love the subject matter you have chosen, and your word choices are above average for this site.

    Now for the critique:

    "the road to hell was paved
    with good intentions."

    That's a very cliche line.

    "It was as if he was living inside Picasso's Guernica
    when the explosions baptized his life,
    sprinkling his eyes with death, scattering pieces of his heart
    on that holy ground.
    (It was so early to be immolated)"

    This is my favorite stanza. I love the "Guernica" reference. However, I would change "holy ground" to "unholy ground." Also, "early" should be "easy".

    After this stanza, the poem starts to get a little too wordy. I rewrote it with less words to try to make it more forceful. Feel free to use or disregard these suggestions:

    He feeds his demons daily,
    as the blind balance weighs the disaster:
    one hundred twenty-three lying dead in Darwin,
    three hundred and fifty more-- exiled on white and blue soil.

    He wanted to be an art teacher one day--
    marry a girl called Guadalupe;
    but he was buried alive in that wind-swept hellhole,
    ...and no one will remember his name.

  • 12 years ago

    by Decayed

    He would like to have been an Art teacher,
    maybe he could have married a girl called Guadalupe
    but he was buried alive.
    He is sleeping in that cemitery with the other lambs.

    'cemitery' should be 'cemetery'

    ^ I don't know why I didn't comment on this, I thought I did........................ and this stanza is BRILLIANT... It's like a lifetime summarized within those lines. It sounds, reads and paints perfect poetry.

  • 12 years ago

    by Paul Gondwe

    Thanks for sharing such an amazing poem. i really liked how you portrayed the hopes of the soldier if he hadnt gone to war. Great work.

  • 12 years ago

    by Lioness

    Karla,

    I am glad you put the note down at the bottom of the poem for a bit of history about the war

    Your poem is so well written and so true that parts of it could relate to any war or destruction.

    Very descriptive and the violent images I can see clearly.

    He feeds his demons daily
    as the blind balance weighs the disaster:
    123 lie in the Darwin cemitery,
    350 committed suicide exiled on white and blue soil,
    and the rest was shunned and branded as failures.
    Nobody saw they were 18-19 years old
    when they were invited to conquer paradise.
    ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
    The figures here are daunting but I really love the way it adds more truth to the poem. It makes us connect to the poem more.

    He would like to have been an Art teacher,
    maybe he could have married a girl called Guadalupe
    but he was buried alive.
    He is sleeping in that cemitery with the other lambs.
    ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
    This was probably for me the most heartbreaking and one that would relate to the title very much. The fact that these heroes could have had a life after... it is sad that they are forgotten. They sacrifice so much!!!

    A really awesome tribute Karla

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