The Way You See Me

by Lioness   Jan 16, 2012


It seems
as though your thoughts of me
are not justified
by any means

You glance at me
with loathing eyes
though...
You should be seeing me
through an open heart

No kind words to offer
such a broken soul
No words of wisdom
to bestow

Just pure hatred
intended for me

I know
that I may not be perfect nor...
beautiful

but...

you seem to think it's ok
to remind me of this?

I question myself -
and my life
for you see me as nothing

and it kills me

*A poem about my mother-in-law*

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  • 12 years ago

    by sniper

    So sad... :(

  • 12 years ago

    by Jenna Bella Oldridge

    I can't believe your mothering law makes you feel this way. It makes me angry when someone makes me feel this way so I can only imagine how you feel.

    I have to be honest I loved this poem as it came off so honest and open. A sad write but it was very well worded

    Excellent

    5/5

  • 12 years ago

    by Mostafa

    Well done : )
    I have nothing else to say for they have said it all
    5/5

  • 12 years ago

    by Joy Helberg

    This is great! I myself had some kind of experienced like this anyhow well done

  • 12 years ago

    by Innocent Fairy

    Wow great poem and it feels I definitely relate as known by my poems,,hugs and ur a great person so don't care too much on what she thinks of u,,ur way more than nothing :) 5/5

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