Young love

Awwww... this poem was so sweet and adorable... I think there's something special about young love, and you expressed the feelings so beautifully.

This part was so beautiful and like a breath of fresh air:

when the air would be so thick
with love,
I could barely see
beyond the softness
of your flesh and
feel anything other
than your hand
in mine..

>> sooo sweet! I love how the air is filled with love.

I love the ending... I can relate to that. Not just missing a person, but missing the both of you and how things were that time.

Beautiful poem <3

Nice One , Sensual :)

Lovely and wonderfully written I loved it great job 5/5

Nominated, no bet! Will comeback with a proper comment.

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Lovely, tender, emotional and moving.

The worst part after a break-up is the memories, when you certainly know you won't be able to have them, yet you cannot stop remembering! I LOVED how you expressed this idea. The ending was marvellous, took me to another realm! I missed your poetry, twin. I truly missed it.

This better wins the next week.

Oh Yaki, I could so relate to all of this,

It reminded me of my first love, how he made me feel and the fact that I miss "Us" not just him but all the things we did and the memories we made

This was a really sweet if sad poem

Very nice
love
Tara
xxx