Revive.

Oh god I didn't commment on this/!!!!

ok I want another poem right NOW

mwa love

Very sweet poem. Really enjoyed it. Starting with:

Your eyes crinkle
and lips part like a crescent moon,
as light whispers soaked in watercolor
trail down my spine -

I loved your use of metaphors here. Was done very nicely. And then light and color. The way you used the two together as they go together anyways was done great. They went hand in hand with each other. :)

for you are a feathered sun,
untangling knots within my heart
and sewing scars with butterflies -
setting it alight.

This part I thought was really cool. loved the part "untangling knots within my heart"
And then again hand in hand with the butterflies here. All in all a great write. :) P.S. wanted to give a better comment for ya. lol :)

Beautiful poem, creates some great imagery.

Beautiful well written poem.I loved every lines!

Your words are refreshingly beautiful. I love your choice of adjectives in this piece; there's always such a great depth of character, of soul, in how you approach putting Love into language.

"for you are a feathered sun, "

I thought that line was particularly strong.
So many different ways one can interpret that phrase. I myself was brought back to a few fond memories.

Very well done (: