Newspaper

Love the metaphor of the newspaper as your feelings, so great. 5/5

This is also a great poem:)

I liked the idea jenni of using the newspaper as a metaphor for your inner most feelings. the way u used the paper to covey this message is clever and innotive. the poem is quiet and also short. a newspaper is always disregarded and thrown out and through irony you get this across in your poem about not wanting to be used like the daily newspaper. i like this poem it was a clever poem done tastefully well.

I giggled almost at how it started off with "Stop Reading"... Seriously.

Who puts that at the beginning of their poem, it made me smile :D Haha~! I loved the poem though.

I believe this piece was intended for the short piece you wrote. I do agree with Tara, the ending is a bit odd, but I don't know because it does make sense and it kind of adds to the poem but i guess most of the time poems need to "feel" write.

It felt very powerful and i could feel all that was going on inside of your mind. Thank you for sharing this piece and there is so much more i Could say but i loved the poem and i believe anything i would say would have ruined this particular piece.

Thank you :D

Appericiated !