One Step...

I can say I truly saw myself in this. I think the bigger disappointment is in ourself, for not seeing through the lies. It is so unfortunate that we can't just give in to our love, we have to figure out the others intentions/feelings. Excellent work.

So many know this feeling all too well, the gut wrenching emotion and the feeling of the fool. You should know better, but don't want to, because even a moment of good seems to make it worth it, until you learn what true love really is. This poem brought me back to one relationship in particular that truly molded my future relationships, and I thank God for it, no matter how hurtful it was.

This definitely played on my emotions, very vivid and strong. Beautifully sad write, honest and truthful.

Liz, this spoke to me fervently.
I love the image of being one step ahead. It just clears the image more.

I'm watching a series about this case of disappointment. The lover lies, manipulates the feelings... just to play on both sides.

Awesome.

Wooow Liz, this is really heartfelt. And true, we can never choose who we love, we are easily allured to the idea of love but once we are stuck in it its really hard to get out.

Great piece hun.

Hope i had dat power to reverse tym...i wuld tak u bak to wea t al started n u wuld mak another selection of those hu wil never disappoint u. i luv ua piece.