Me part 2

by marlon lumangyao   Mar 9, 2012


A sad story,
a tragic movie,
a sorrowful poem,
i'm a tearful song.

a lonely boy
left abandoned,
with a broken toy,
with a broken home.

a dungeon place
with a sound of tears,
i'm a poker face
playing solitaire.

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  • 12 years ago

    by L

    Yup, it's well done.

    I like the last line the most playing solitaire.
    Though, now that I think about it. Solitaire is not boring or it doesn't feel lonely lol at least to me. But thats the game so it's another story.

  • 12 years ago

    by marlon lumangyao

    True?? hahahaha yes! i got an appreciation from my idol..yahoooooo.....

  • 12 years ago

    by Maple Tree

    Powerful piece Marlon..
    deep and heartfelt emotions within...
    well done~

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