Me

Sad poem :( 5/5

Sometimes we don't want to face life, we just want to turn away and wait until the dust settles again. But in this 'life', nothing will happen unless we take action.
"You wanna scream 'cause you're
Desperate"
---the word 'wanna' is considered an informal word, but for others, it's not a word entirely. Consider changing wanna to 'want to'.
"You want somebody, just anybody
To lay their hands on your soul tonight
You want a reason to keep believin'"
---I love this part. The deperation you mentioned earlier is explicitly shown here.
Overall, a very nice write. But I don't understand the quotation mark placed in the beginning. Other than that, a really worthy read. Keep writing.
-X

Hard sad lines...
I liked it!

Steven

Love this poem...like to read again and again....excellent5/5

You want somebody, just anybody
To lay their hands on your soul tonight
You want a reason to keep believin'
That someday you're gonna see the light
You're in the dark
There's no one left to call
And sleep's your only friend
Well even sleep
Can't hide you from all those tears
And all the pain and all the days
You wasted pushin' them away
It's your life, it's time you face it

<<Its hard to go thru this thing called life especially when u feel all alone :/ trust me im sure alot of us have been there i know i have and i can relate.

Like u said sooner or later you just have to face the music itll pass its just going thru it that makes it so hard

good job :]]

5/5
Tammi Toxic