Love Story Gone Wrong

by Jake   Apr 4, 2012


They met from a mutual friend of theirs,
And it was crazy from the beginning.
They both knew that the others kind was rare,
And immediately sparked like lightning.

They talked all the time and started to fall,
Both was beautiful and sweet as can be.
They were both perfect they were both oddballs,
They had fun... until he broke up with me.

It was sudden, and it was horrible,
He left me in the dust for another.
He ripped my heart and left it In crumbles,
And told me he loves me like a sister.

I can't hate him but he tells me I should,
But I would do it again if I could.

(This was a poem i wrote for a friend of mine, i wrote it in her perspective. It is a sonnet Styled poem that took me just under 30 minutes to make, hope you like)

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  • 11 years ago

    by PETER EDWARDS

    Like it. 'Says it how it was.'
    A good poem.

  • 11 years ago

    by Max

    Good job but i guess u still need to work on rhymes for a bit yet so good luck with ur next work and keep on =)

  • 11 years ago

    by DeviousCharmer

    Awesome :D

  • 11 years ago

    by Girl of Conviction

    Very good :]

    i liked it

  • 11 years ago

    by Faith Ann

    Cute...good job ;)