Natural Friendship (Collaboration)

I thought this was an awesome piece. Thought everything flowed nicely and complemented each other. Starting with:

Flowers laced with sapphire blue,
glitter sparkles upon morning peace
sharing a sunshine whisper,
laughter ignites, our friendship is golden.

I loved the use of metaphors here. For instance "glitters sparkle upon morning peace" I thought this was really neat. I could really picture this.

Butterflies fly back to you,
planting my smile in your heart,
drawing our friendship to a far land
for us alone to enjoy our time.

This part was cute. you could really see the butterfly going across the land. And no matter how far the bond of the friendship is close your heart.

Dragonflies applaud our joy,
as rivers join the words we write
uniting two souls, on one sweet cloud,
we together, wishing upon stars.

This was very nice and soothing. I could picture here two friends on the clouds just relaxing and having a good time watching the shooting stars as they pass by.

While the moon greets us with a sweet smile
melodies of the wind sing our words,
and embrace our friendship,
to never split it apart.

I thought this was a nice ending to this poem. It really concluded that your friendship is strong and unbreakable. All in all a great job. :)

Oh a gorgeous collab with you. I can feel both of your presence in this poem the beautiful nature aspect and of course the happiness!

Lovely collab!!! Well done both of you

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I enjoyed this! This reminds me of my poem I just wrote, Natures Response, I'm really liking the metaphors that include nature and a relationship, makes the poem very interesting, so creative...

Very well written ladies, cute ways to express a friendship!

Wow what a collab !
definitely one of my favorites ! : 3
great job : )

What a beautiful, mesmerizing nature piece.. so raw.. so organic.. and yet so melodic :)

But ladies, there is a new feature in which you don't have to say that it's a collab. Just go to this poem through the EDIT button, and under the title box, there is a box for Collabs. Enter the email of each another (Andrea enters Emily's email she uses in PnQ, and Emily enters Andrea's email she uses in PnQ)..... in that way, Andrea's link to her profile appears in Emily's poem, and vice versa.

:)