by Rihanna Apr 20, 2012
category :
Sadness, depression /
about depression
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I'll fake all the smiles |
by Marvellous
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..yet it's quite better, now you have shared.. Well done! High 5! from meee.. |
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Wonderful bravo:) 5/5 |
by Mello193
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Yeah at least you tried right? well id maybe change the stanzas around a little but other than that a sweetly sad poem. its sad that someone would have to go about life like this. i think that lies the true tragedy here. wonder poem however |
by Solus
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Sometimes the need to write is all that is required.... |
by L
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Keep writing, The emotion is felt within this piece despite the little grammar errors but then again I have plenty of those. |