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by Kips Apr 25, 2012
Love, romance /
Even if darkness covers my vision,
I will not allow it to cause any division,
And when our days become cold and dreary,
Do not let your love for me become weary.
Even if our circumstances make us despair
I will always treasure the moments we share,
And though the world comes to an end,
Still you will always remain my friend.
Even if for some reasons we ever grow apart,
You will forever remain in my heart;
I love you more than mere words could tell,
Your name will always ring a bell.
Even if the distance between us becomes longer,
My love for you will continue to grow stronger,
And the love I have for you will ever remain true;
The best thing that ever happened to me is you.
by Hannah Lizette
Wonderful flow throughout, and very sweet and touching. 5/5
Wonderful decision of words and flow. I really joyed reading this, and I don't know who wouldn't, great job, 100/100, can't wait to read more, have a nice day
Wow.. Perhaps the only rhyming love poem I really enjoyed reading xD
No criticism whatsoever. Really well-written