As I define love

by marvsdvinci   Apr 29, 2012


Hey ms.Lana...
how are you today?...
hey am kinda' ,
missin you each day...

lookin for something,
that'l ease the pain...
longing for one thing,
it's You,keeping me in vain...

the wind blew,
seeing some dancing bamboo...
i'm feeling blue,
why cant it be,me and you..

staring at the sky,
i'm wondering...
It's your china eyes,
your name,i'm whispering...

like a jamming,
of thunder and lightning...
i'm trembling,
hate to see you go,im melting...

Dark clouds covered the sky...
just like another river run dry...
just like that,our love faded and die...
Do i need to cry?Is this really goodbye?....

The meaning of love,
Defines you and me...
Or should i say....
the meaning of love,
Is setting you free.....

"As i define Love"
marvsdvinci

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  • 13 years ago

    by marvsdvinci

    Thank you crishmerl.....sorry for the error....^_^ its my first time here in this site.....

    Thanks!

  • 13 years ago

    by Yrem Crish

    Wow. great piece! I love your style to write poem..it is fascinating...the flows and the lines as it goes on..
    Uhmmm..just a little mess..try to look tremmbling in the fifth stanza--edit it to trembling...but, as a whole it's great..i enjoy everything on this piece...
    Still i vote it 5/5
    keep writing more and god bless=)

    • 13 years ago

      by marvsdvinci

      By the way pano ko ba ieedit yung piece??