This is fantastic! I love the rhythm; it could also pass as a song. It does seem that he has the best of us, when we're at our lowest, and we forget that it's only because we let him get the best of us.
The ending really did it for me.
The wording was brilliant and the poem has been well written
8 years ago
I like the whole poem and the rhymes too.
but the last line was the one that truly did it for me
-let your wings stretch forth -
I found so much inspiration within those few words, aim towards the future, and keep going open up and achieve, that's what those words mean to me. I actually there is more but in general that's how I can say them.