Life's Dark Hole

Thomas~
This is a saddening piece. I can't really relate to it since I've been homeschooled all my life, but this piece made me feel how you felt. Just by reading this, I feel horrible. I'm really sorry you had to go through this; no one deserves this, but I assure you, these little things that bring us down will sooner or later be a huge factor in helping us achieve our dreams.
These things give us strength and I hope you realize that. Just by knowing, writing and sharing about what you're going through shows your strength. Just hold on and appreciate those things now, because in the future, when you're more successful and more powerful than they are, you'll smile and thank them for making you stronger.
Suicide is not an answer. You have talent; look at this piece. We could never lose a growing talent like you (:
Keep your head high, and I aswell, am always here whenever you need anyone to talk to. Don't hesitate to drop me a pm.
Keep writing!
-X

This is a very deep and meaningful poem, it is also pained.. i can tell the hurt that you felt in high school...but theres stilll many years ahead of you you have to stsay strong.... and you gota remember that there is still life to live, you never know what might happen....thats what so scared about it, you never know..your past in your past....you have a strong future.....you have to make it strong...this is a good piece of poetry..nice work

First of all let me apologize, I am sorry that you had to endure this and I wish that things are better now.
It feels that by being so straightforward about this, you got the strength to fight against those people now. The short verses help for this poem to read well.
In case you ever need someone, just send me a PM.

Well I never feel this in high school ( in now)
But I know how does it feel like to be picked on
It sure feels bad but u should have never thought of suicide as an option at all
Cause actually they win when you lose hope lol
Never give up is what you should do if he is more powerful than you then train to be better
For the poem I think u got some rhyme at some parts which made the flow easier and much better
You were good at choosing your words too
descripes the situation well
I liked the ending but it was so full of depression
It is sad poem so emotional and hold good message
And it is well written
5/5 keep writing =)

Kids are very cruel this days, they love
to make themselves look bigger by
harrassing others and make them look smaller. That's why the suicide rate
amongst teenagers is so high.
It seems like these kids have a lot of
anger issues they might feel sad or lost
as well, no reason to take it out on
others. Eventually one day they wil meet
their match, someone who will fight back
5/5