Release Me [Acrostic]

by Boy   Jun 15, 2012


Rolling back the old days
Each and everything came into
Love longings, splendid memories
Exactly touching softly my heartbeats
Again the things come I do not want
Supernatural stunning moments are in
Escalating the circumstances of my heart

My Lord please help me to relieve mystery
Especially release me for the last time

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Acrostic Poetry is where the first letter of each line spells a word, usually using the same words as in the title. @

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  • 7 years ago

    by Yakori bint Muhammed

    One will miss out its an acrostic while reading because of its smooth flow. This is like a motivational note that breezes into one every now and then. Simply enriching and spontaneous to the senses. It gives that peaceful assurance that all shall be well. Written wisely with a string of hope surrounding it. Lovely i must say. :-) ..

    • 7 years ago

      by Boy

      Thanks dear. :)

  • 7 years ago

    by Amreen

    Very nicely woven Acrostic...:)
    A mature write and it speaks out a message(:

    Rolling back the old days
    Each and everything came into
    Love longings, splendid memories
    Exactly touching softly my heartbeats

    ^^
    I loved this part.. full of reminiscence of gone times....:)

    Wonderful!! 5/5^^

  • 7 years ago

    by mira

    I just love it the words are nice and true great work well done

  • 7 years ago

    by Meme

    Really good poem my friend :)

  • 7 years ago

    by Ms Happiness

    I love Acrrostics I really do:)
    And this one is really great, awesome job Hassan:)