No Longer Your Victim

Beautiful, as always, Liz.. your writings are so close to my heart and mind, very light while reading, yet denser than mountains in meaning. Ugh... you always move me.

Lizzy...

I am just sitting here and wanting not to comment. Actually too sad t comment and this write just made me sigh. A damn deep sigh. What a strength you do have to admit such a thing. :/ I think it's time for me to do so.

Love this and love you even more. Missed you.

Another beautiful poem, Liz. As with most of your poems, if not all, I believe this one also has a deeper meaning to it.

'You may be able
to see the bruises on
my skin but you cannot
see the bruises around
my heart,'

^ Love this part right here. The beginning catches my attention right away, and I must say that it is beautiful. It is also true - I believe that we suffer so much more mentally than physically sometimes.

'For so long I
was the victim
of your livid emotions
which somehow brought
me down with you.'

^ I love this stanza as well. Beautiful.

I have to agree with Luce, and Kyra. The ending was marvelous. It made me want to fight back with you. I also love the strength that is showing in this poem, because it indicates that you have come a long way.

Excellent
5/5

Good for you!
I'm so glad that you no longer will be a victim, but a strong survivor! It takes a strong woman to stand up for herself when she has been pushed down so many times.

A powerful write, love it.

When I read this, I felt a deep emotion, such as I am releasing this pain, and i am taking a stand.
L<3ve it!