When you see

by Khalid   Jun 29, 2012


When you see a kid happy

When you see a new dream

When you see the tears wiped

When you see a smile planted

When you see the eyes shine

When you see the hope

as a smile with kisses

or a touch of tenderness

via the heavens

..... Then you see nothing but my love

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  • 6 years ago

    by Marcy Lewis

    This is such a pleasant piece. It's very intimate, and it made me get butterflies, actually.

    When you see the hope

    as a smile with kisses

    or a touch of tenderness

    via the heavens

    ..... Then you see nothing but my love

    ^^That was so sweet. Lovely flow, and expression of love for your significant other. Beautiful writing, as always!

  • This one is really beautiful!

    Such great flow and imagery.

    I really loved the ending - I actually didn't expect it and for something so simply put, it really was a powerful statement of love.

    Fantastic. 5/5

  • 7 years ago

    by Khalid

    Thank you!

  • 7 years ago

    by Robert Gardiner

    Lovely, Much Enjoyed!!!

  • 7 years ago

    by Rebecca Bentley

    Beautiful poem, with a great flow :)