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I found this piece quite sad indeed. So much said in 3 lines!

Love it hun

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Most of the time, I can relate to this so much, epic, Andrea :)

This small piece says so much in only 17 syllables! Perfect M.T :)

I realized that lately a lot of people have been writing Senryus and Haikus and I actually like that, as I really enjoy these little poems.

Yours is really heartwrenching, but I loved reading it nonetheless. I thought that your choice of words was really fitting and I hope that you don't really feel this way.

This is sad, The last line is very strong, leaving empathy towards the writer.

5/5