by It Itty Jun 28, 2004
category :
Life, society /
inspirational
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I didn't want to be this way. |
by Anne Conner
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This is a very nice poem, but like some of the others said the rythm needs some work. The message is really good though. |
by Cassandra
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thanx for the comment I really enjoy your poems |
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there is something about poetry that is sublime. excellent |
by Lipton
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You never told me you wrote! Shame on you! Jk. Good poem, though! |
by Ali
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okay...the flow wasn't rhyming, but it was good. I think that with a few rhythm adjustments you could really go places...rock on |