You give me wings/Tu mere udaan hai

by Karla   Jul 26, 2012


We hid ourselves in the raven's heaven,
to chase poems and prepare new flights.
How high can we soar from now on?

Let's dive into the sky, listening to all
those songs that make our hearts dance
and our souls sing.
It is amazing when we laugh together.
Tu bot changa we.
Tu mere waste bada khaas we

I collected stars to make you a necklace.
You reminded me of all the words
I didn't know how to spell anymore.
What will the Gods whisper to us
when tomorrow comes wrapped in
ifs, my sweet pari?

Don't say anything right now.
Let's close our eyes and live.
Tu mera sab kuch we.
Tu mere udaan hai.

Karla Bardanza

For AT

The sentences above are written in Punjab
Tu bot changa we - you are so sweet/nice
Tu mere waste bada khaas we - you are special for me.
Tu mera sab kuch we. - you are everything
Tu mere udaan hai - you give me wings

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  • 13 years ago

    by Darren

    I love how the lines written in punjab add to the poem rather than break the flow

    great job as usual

  • 13 years ago

    by LittleMermaid

    I was wondering when i read the title of the poem,that the language used here is somewhat related to my neighboring country...n yes it was!!
    the poem is really sweet!!
    i understood the poem without reading the note at last..for it is familiar to me..n you've added that,so AT has of course understood the whole of it.

    Wanted to know,when did u learn the language??n ur idea in using it together with english??
    but anywys,that was rather sweettt.
    ^_^

  • 13 years ago

    by Lostlove1

    Sweet

  • 13 years ago

    by Lioness

    Exotic and beautiful!

    I collected stars to make you a necklace.
    ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
    Oh how poetic was that line. This piece is truly beautiful. Loved the words and romantic feel to the whole entire piece!

    x

  • 13 years ago

    by average thoughts

    Thank u so much..dear

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