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by Karla   Jul 27, 2012


Take off my veil
and dress the universe.
I want to be naked
forever before my truth
and imagination.

Karla Bardanza
http://asmoonsewsthesatinstars.blogspot.com
http://skycladatmidnight.tumblr.com

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  • 11 years ago

    by BLBrown

    To me, this is almost about accepting one's truth. We all lie to ourselves about who we are, what we want, etc.. It is a natural human condition to not be able to see clear through to our very souls until achieving enlightenment.

    I enjoyed this because it made me stop and think...always a sign of a good poem. What truth lies before me that I do not recognize? It is hard to live with truth.

    Did I get this right? Loved the poem and am enjoying this group!

  • 11 years ago

    by Decayed

    What is it about you?

    FLAWLESSNESS

  • 11 years ago

    by Lostlove1

    Awesome piece Karla. Imagery fantastic with a meaning deeper than I can put my finger on right now.

  • 11 years ago

    by Lioness

    I feel that in this piece the veil represents your thoughts, feelings and emotions. Your beliefs and morals. When you express that you want to cover the universe with your veil I'd imagine it would be you wanting to express your beliefs and thoughts to the world, the freedom to say what you want without remifications.

    I love this piece, it really has made me think. Who knows it may not be exactly what I thought but I love what I have gotten from this piece.

    Gorgeous!

    x

  • 11 years ago

    by mandy

    A rich and pure poem, wonderfully written. 5/5/

    mandy :)